This poem, created in our writers’ group, is based on the beautiful Mary Oliver poem, “Next Time”. Our writing leader, Roanne, had us read the poem and then create our own poem about transformation over or across time. I had just returned from Montreal from a visit with my mother who has Alzheimer’s. This poem, since revised, is what came to me. It mixes regret with new starts, expectations with responsibilities. I think.
NEXT TIME – with appreciation for Mary Oliver
Next time, she would cuddle into the fold of her arm a bit longer lulling her longer into affection so they both could learn the comfort of a forever hug.
Next time, she would push her on the wooden swing and watch her mother’s legs break the blue of the sky back and forth, forth and back.
Next time, she would not walk so fast along that pathway by the sea so that her responses to the uncharacteristically personal questions would not be tosses over her shoulder, but considered.
Next time, she would not bury her head further into her book to appear unobservant when she heard the tap of the heels in the hallway, and the crunch of a green apple, and yes she would like a bite.
Next time, she would watch how her mother naturally relaxed in the gaze and laugh of her step-father and she would know great affection and appreciation much earlier. And, she would thank her mother for choosing him.
Next time, she would tell her that a sad thing can be talked about and it’s not “being too sensitive” to ruminate and seek what is needed.
Next time, she would bathe and wrap the swollen feet and slip on the pink, fuzzy socks, pat the toes gently and not mind the reaction; an act of love is simply that, requiring no response.
Next time, she would be with her as if the world stood still and all of this – was fine, ok – the silences, spaces, repetitions, rubbing of the fingers, delayed laughs.
She may act like time had nothing to do with this. They were just two people in a yellow-afternoon space with no past, just two people sharing a winter afternoon.